Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 06:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: That was cute ^-^ I greatly enjoyed the wording on your sentances, they were interesting, and I am glad for the line about Taka-chan running out of the room and closing the door behind.... most people would have said running out the door and closing the door behind.... I am very happy that you did not ^-^ The ending was very nice too, a sweet little ending for a fluf-filled fic ^-^
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