| "That Summer" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never though that those two would be gettin it on but now I've read it. I would love to read more... and yeah its a bit disturbing to have Java watch the whole thing. =P
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Reviewed By: DJ-Rage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 12:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
D2: I agree with Di, Java would have left
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Reviewed By: Di On: August 25, 2006 02:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story was awesome, but did java really have to watch them having sex in the end. that was sorta creepy. he could have at least left. lol ^_^
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Reviewed By: theguy11 On: August 21, 2006 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good fic, I was waiting for someone to come up with a fic like this:)
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