Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
aww :( sadness :( But it was nicely written. It's rare for me to find a story written in present tence first person.... and done well with out a constant change of present vs past or character.... but you stayed in both, great job *-^ I enjoyed the story quite a bit ^^ nicely written. The start was sure catchy, and the ending was effective as well ^-^
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