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| "Darkstar" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Yuri
Reviewed By: Yuri Susuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very interesting. I hope that you can think up more so that i can read it. your grammar nad spelling is very good since it is your second language. Over all very well written.
| Title: Update this fic!!
Reviewed By: Syrus Magistus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... someone accually wrote a fic about a Succubus from D & D. Interesting... I was just browsing and I found this lil' work of "erotica." My good forture aside, you seem to know your D & D stuff. I'm from the newest D & D generation and I'm preparing to run a campaign at my school as the DM and I'm going to probably end up decimating thier characters with high level undead. However whats really weird is that there's going to be a high level NPC "helping" them along that almost matches this one's discription. It's a Succubus/Dragon hybrid who is very high-ranking in the abyss, Kaosu the Sorceress. I just thought that was interesting that I accidently found a story about a very similar character. Are you gonna update? I'd like to see what "happens" when she (inevedibly) runs into a group of characters exploring the abyss. Keep writing. ~Syrus
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