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Reviewed By: soubifan700 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 12:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! i LUV your story a lot^^
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Reviewed By: Fried deer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 14:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Hmm, this looks like it will be something really interesting^_^ The only wrong thing I can find is some spelling, but this is definately an original fanfic that I can't wait to read more of! Looking forward to more chapters^_^
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Reviewed By: Ayeka Penor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 22:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Awesome! You definitely have room for improvement from a more technical point of view, spelling is ok but it appears a few similarly-sounding words have been switched. In terms of the story itself, I am on the edge of my seat yearning for more! This is wonderful and completely original!
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Title: Update!!! Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 15:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am really amazed at this fanfic! I really think this story has the makings of something wonderful! =^^= Please update!
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