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| "Sasuke Retrieval 2" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's intresting and update soon. i think you need more deatails in your chapters and use real sentence, not chatroom ones. even if they are more untroublesome. i use to do that until i got to much reviews saying i shouldn't do that. then i had to rewrite the whole thing. it was only five chapters. keep up the good work
| Reviewed By: kyogre_latias [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very interesting. ~_~ Except I think it would be better if you spelled what they're saying in actual sentences, not chatroom-type. BTW, Sakura calls Sasuke "Sasuke-kun," ; Tunande is spelled "Tsunade," ; Sakura calls Lee "Lee-san,", and vice-versa. Keep up the good work. =)
| Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story is interesting. keep up the good work.
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