| "Two Sparrows in A Hurricane" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: lovehimfroever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so CUTE!!! PLEASE! Please oh please oh please oh PLEASE let Kagome back through the well! I wanna know what happens next! Please update! I love it! And please have InuYasha know that what he's doing is WRONG!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I love your characterization and your plot. It's sad that poor Inuyasha can't seem to be accepted no matter where he goes (and no matter how much good he does!)....and that he continually punishes himself for things not his fault. He could be so happy if he just learned to give himself a break! Kikyou seems to be decent in this story, so I hope she'll do the right thing about that barrier SOON. I have really enjoyed what I've read so far (the whole story in ONE day), and I definitely look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 09:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story, but I'm wondering if you're going to continue it, because it doesn't feel finshed to me. If you write more I promise I'll read it.
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