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"Locker Room" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 26, 2007 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was good, original, interesting...but yea, good. I will have to admit that it was a little confusing during that last chapter or so where the dialogue got a little mixed and I wasn't always sure who was talking. And even though the story ends sort of abruptly, the plot was neat, something I haven't read before. Keep up the great work!

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