"Guardian" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: methakamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 20:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please continue this fic. it's really good so far and im completely in love with it. please keep going. ;D | Reviewed By: shaddeh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 08:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Meep...I've owed you this review for quite awhile now. :X Be merciful, I've been gearing up for finals week. Well...heh...here I am? *hides* >.>
I feel guilty about abandoning Jecht like this (the poor baby :p), but you're really doing an awesome job with this Serra/Auron pairing. Just keep going as you are and taking your time with introducing it and it'll be great. ^^
Wonderful job as always~! Ergh, school calls again. e.x; Good luck on your next chapter ^^ I hope it comes swiftly for you! Great work!
~Shad | Reviewed By: shaddeh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 19:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Dammit, woman! :D
I'm strongly for the Jecht/Jecht's wife pairing, but you're making a relationship with Auron very plausible here, and I'm not sure I like that :P Strike that, I do, and your writing is fabulous as always, it's just that I've got mixed feelings about the un-Jechtness of it all. ^_^v (But you make it so realistic, I could see a Serra/Auron, too...oh, I'm torn! :P)
Incredible job on this. Keep it up! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Shadowreborn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 23:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, i am blowen away at how good of a story this is. First of all you have hit on auron really staying true to him. Something most writers on here just don't do. Also i loved how you would swith view points like you did i think that was one of the best parts of the story. I hope there is more to it because i would be happy to read it. Good job you have talent i wish i had. Thank you for the well done story | Reviewed By: shaddeh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 23:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Have I mentioned I adore this fic? :D I hope you won't mind that I placed this review here instead of FF.net...
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Mastery of the pen...er...keyboard, heheh...Anyway, originality ahoy!
I was so moved in particular by Tidus' little interlude in Chapter 6. But I'm right here -- Oh lord, that tugged at my heartstrings so wonderfully.
You must get more out soon. PLEASE. ^_^;; |
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