| "Thorn Blades" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 13:06 CDT
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kikyo is an ugly little bitch!!!!!!!!!!!! - Rinkusu
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
was this spell checked before it was posted? Oh well it wasn't too bad and yeah it's good that you've been writing all this time... But this chapter definetly needs way more details...I like the ideas you have so far, so no more slacking off with the typing and have all the fun you want! P.S. Need some flame in this story and I think the little notes in certain places make you seem like you doubt yourself, don't do that... keep your head up and keep at it! Again, good job so far!
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Title: Don't Worry
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not too bad, this chapter just lacked the desription of the battles, hey I'm bad at writing fight scenes as well but I think it would help if you can find a way to be more descriptive and keep up the good work... I know school sux for me 2 lolz, take your time because when break comes you'll have all the time to write your butt off!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaChic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 13:14 CDT
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Good work! I really enjoyed it! Will Kagome and Inuyasha fight in later gang wars? That could be awkquard... Anyways, Update soon, I really enjoyed this chapter!
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Title: Lolz
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAy, i expected more but i take what i can get, loving it so far, i like the entire girls being baddasses and controlling the guys thing... reminds me of well ME lolz! Good job I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: funny inuyasha called kags
Reviewed By: karin On: August 25, 2006 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic story got me to laugh alot good job keep work on it!
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Title: Loookie here
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 21:11 CDT
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i noticed that you like the guys in pairings older than the guys with a few exceptions... anyway thanx for ending the chapter the way you did, well you make sure you get enough rest before and when school starts!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Artic Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so far. I think that making Naraku 17 and having a 16 year old step daughter is a bit confusing. I have out my first fan fic called 'Broken Shadows and Hidden Secrets' so i know that its not that easy to update very fast. Hey maybe if you have some spare time you could tell me what you think.
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Title: Ummm...
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm... where's the rest of that chapter... that ended up bit quick, don't you think? Well I like what I'm seeing so far... and why couldn't Inuyasha sit in between Miroku and Kagome and Have Sango on the other side of Miroku? Two guys in between two girls sound good to me... well like I said, liking the story, just wish there was more for me to read... so update soon!
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Reviewed By: InusBasket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 09:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gewd story! Keep updating!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it for now, um maybe you can amke it so that the band thing has something to do with how she fast she came face to face with the one she has to save the world from... or you can do your own thing... so far so good and keep up the good work
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Title: So far so good
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story so far but i feel like its missing something...leave the band thing in there its what makes your story even more unique and it would help to extend the story if you somehow tie this in with the miko/defense/offense training that Kagome has been receiving. Your writing is satisfactory...more descriptive please... your spelling and grammar is good... creative story hell yeah... and i love it! Are you planning to introduce the characters of your story one by one or something like that? hmmm... so far i like it and keep at it... okay enough rambling...i hope what i said so far has helped in some way!
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 14:47 CDT
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This a really good fan fic! I Like it. Update soon. I'll probably reveiw more and if I forget to log in II'll go By Rinkusu_kikyo_hater!
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good...can't wait for the next update
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