| "Thorn Blades" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 21:42 CDT
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i agree with pupp lol update soon please from the looks of it you haven't updated in a year i reviewed now write write write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you got me hooked!
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Reviewed By: pupp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 16:32 CDT
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Hehehe...Math test...good times, good times...update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaycee On: December 08, 2006 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You could of ended it alot better
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my GOD!!!!! i love your story!!!! it's so hilarious!!!1 that makes two hundred adn fourty nine times that i've used the words hilarious in hte passed month. my friends gonna kill me!!! (runs away adn hides behind a tree, peeking out from behind the trunk every couple of seconds adn then hides again whimpering) oh well!!^^ please continue writing!!! love it!!!!! post another chapter soon!!!bye ^^
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Title: Me likey...
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
May I say i have no idea where this story is going but I'm liking the way it's going... can't believe it's December either! Okay next update should be so funny! Oh and will Inu and Kag fall in love before he admits what he did for her? Great job...
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Reviewed By: krystalmoonlight On: December 01, 2006 22:52 CST
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Awsome keep it up the good work update soon
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Reviewed By: krystalmoonlight On: December 01, 2006 22:52 CST
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Awsome keep it up the good work update soon
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Reviewed By: krystalmoonlight On: December 01, 2006 22:52 CST
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Awsome keep it up the good work update soon
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Reviewed By: krystalmoonlight On: December 01, 2006 22:51 CST
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Awsome keep it up the good work update soon
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Reviewed By: thedog45 On: November 28, 2006 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue please its a great fic
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Title: Better... Much Better
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is a huge improvement from the last one posted and I'm glad to say that your story seems to be getting back on track and the text is not too confusing anymore... stop doubting yourself it throws off the reading! be happy with what you've written, also I like the little endings of your chapters where the characters actually have a voice- It's so funny and cute- can't wait for next update... let's see if you can remain with your natural highs!
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Title: Hmmm... what is there to say?
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
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Stop writing you stupid whore!lolz jp- boring chapter i Guess... try to fix it and revise it before putting up another post...think before you write, its too choppy and confusing...think about this, how the hell can u sit down and talk when u are in a coma, it makes NO sense. Try to research the mind in a coma and add details... sorry if this is harsh! Write more later after revising this unless it has some significance for being written this way! Okay work but not great!
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