| "Preternatural Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: furin_a [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait for so long but Arghhhhhhh Love them together and I will kill Cagalli's husband for them!!!
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Title: Chapter 4 review
Reviewed By: Rose-Rainbow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely wonderful and magnificent story featuring Kira and Cagalli and their incestuous relationship, a wonderful piece of literature. I can tell by your writing style and spelling/grammer and originality/creativity that you are an experienced writer. I very much enjoyed reading this story of yours. It's so hard to find a Cagalli/Kira fanfic where there's sex involved, even when you're really looking. If you don't mind me asking, why is it taking so long for you to update it? Is it writer's block? Lack of reviews? I might be able to help if it's the latter, so please tell me - because I would sincerely love to read more of this ethereal piece of literature.
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Reviewed By: Rose-Rainbow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely wonderful and magnificent story featuring Kira and Cagalli and their incestuous relationship, a wonderful piece of literature. I can tell by your writing style and spelling/grammer and originality/creativity that you are an experienced writer. I very much enjoyed reading this story of yours. It's so hard to find a Cagalli/Kira fanfic where there's sex involved, even when you're really looking. If you don't mind me asking, why is it taking so long for you to update it? Is it writer's block? Lack of reviews? I might be able to help if it's the latter, so please tell me - because I would sincerely love to read more of this ethereal piece of literature.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 13:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good stuff. The ending to chapter 4 seems a bit abrupt, but then again, I am not one to talk.
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