| "The Cousin" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2002 15:12 CDT
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MOOOOOOO!!!
Fantastic chappy. Though it did have a lot of breaks, it certainly wasn't crappy. ^_^
Glasses... heehee. ^_~ Who would think that Ona, who seems so tomboyish, would actually like wearing glasses.
Anyways, awesome work. I'm waiting for your update! But for now... *Off to work on CotU* |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 17:27 CDT
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Awesome, awesome, awesome! Damn, I feel so dry. I read your stories, and then I think about mine, and... ugh, yours are SOOOO much better. Thanks for the dedication. ^_^ Update soooooooon! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 23:31 CDT
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I think at the time I was reading Stupid Monkey, which is in first person. I'm easily influenced by things I read, because tenses are really hard to switch. That's why all my fics are pretty much in third person (I'm starting a 1st POV trend, though). Sorry about that.. There are a few mistakes in that one. I'm actually looking for beta readers.. You know you inspire me, Gyal! And trust me, AUL is coming along amazingly. It puts ME to shame! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 19:44 CDT
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Another GREAT chapter. I've yet to see the day when you write a chapter that isn't fantastic. You put me to shame every time I read your fics. ^_^; Glad to know that I inspired you. *grins*.
I raised an eyebrow, when my father’s face suddenly pointed at me. I almost fell over in shock. One question, though. How come you suddenly switched to first person? S'not bad, just curious. ^_^ Anyway, please update soon!
~Vegeta's Gyal~ |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: May 16, 2002 07:28 CDT
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oooooooooooh, i cant wait :D. im so hyiper and the music im lisening to dosent help. *sigh* i realy wish i was as good as you :( BUT:D im loving this fic i need more and im extreamly happy that your updating again befor the 24th:D
love this fic and ,yes, your still evil,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2002 16:17 CDT
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As always, another fantastic chapter. And it wasn't boring!!! Thanks for the dedications and that, btw. Oh, another thing, I found that Bulma pic on the net. Go to http://www.geocities.com/tinkerbell_dragon/bulma.html (one word, obviously) and click 'Bulma smiling all cheerful'. It should work. I found it by fluke, but it's kinda good I did. Anyways, WRITE MORE!!!
~Vegeta's Gyal~ |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: May 07, 2002 07:29 CDT
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YOU EVIL LIL TURD!!!!!!! *has sad look on her face* you did it again you stoped. :'( *brightens* but but :D you actually said thx to me so :D your not THAT evil. your buu saga veggie-chan. and thats not very evil. ant way love love love this fic.
PLZPLZPLZ POST MORE ASAP,
:)mizu:P
P.S. and APRIL 13, 2002 is already past dont you mean MAY 13, 2002 |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty damn good considering you have writer's block. I have that too, which is why my SM chappie isn't up. Thanks for the dedications and all that. I don't know when Khune will appear, but she will. ^_^ Promise.
~Vegeta's Gyal~ |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2002 15:32 CDT
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GREAT CHAPPIE!!! So was your first one, btw (I forgot 2 review *blushes*) Anywayz, hurry up and get the next chappie up! I totally agree w/ *Sugar*; it's BRUTAL to make us wait so long. Btw, thanx for the ads. ^_^
~Vegeta's Gyal~ |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: April 30, 2002 07:05 CDT
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good im glade your going to put the next one out sooner. and is this a T/O fic? cause it looks like it. any way im loving it and wishing for another ch. to read now,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: *Sugar* On: April 23, 2002 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY LONG!!! *grins* But VERY good. your writin' is so good. I can't WAIT for the next chappie! But the 29th is too far away. *pouts* o well. *Sugar* |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 11:28 CDT
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*sees read* YOU.STOPED. HOW CAN YOU STOP AND NOW YOU TELL ME I HAVE TO WAIT TILL THE 29TH FOR THE NEXT CH.?!? your an ass and a vary evil person. on a scale of 1 to 10 in evil you rate a 22.
pissed that she has to wait so long,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2002 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, thank-you. Anywayz, great chappie. HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE!!!!! *grins* ^_^ I can't wait to read the next chappie.
~Vegeta's Gyal~ |
