| "Never Gonna Let You Go" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 14:09 CDT
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I LOVED IT SOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your story was wanderful!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: September 01, 2006 00:01 CDT
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33 chapters. Complete. :)
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Yashie On: August 31, 2006 14:36 CDT
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awwww i love this story its so beautiful you should make a sequel.
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 09:17 CDT
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very nice story and you wraped it up well also...i hope to see more fics like this from you..now i am gonna see if you have written anymore...
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Reviewed By: kag3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 05:28 CDT
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due you update ALLOT!! cool well great story. kepp it up
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 01:46 CDT
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Wow,even though I know the story, I still wasn't too keen on the Sess/Kag pairing. Inu is real real real forgiving because he had a point, he didn't have kids with kikyo. I mean, yeah Kagome's been through alot but she has 2 babies daddy's and none of which are the love of her life. Inu is an idiot for not marking her, I hope they can really have their happily ever after.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 22:17 CDT
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no sooner than i review than you update! the timing was great!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 21:42 CDT
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i like this fic..i mean u did a new take on everything..i don't think i have read one like this before and being as i have been reading fanfic for 6 years, i have read a lot..plz update soon because i would like to know where you are going with this.
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Title: on second thought...
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...okay so it improved after about ch. 19 so my previous review only applies to ch. 15-19...I don't know what you did differently, but you really got your act together :-P maybe one day you can go back and revise those few...messy chapters so your story will be smooth from beginning to end. anyway. I'm still very excited to find out what happens next so I'll be back soon! Tkae your time updating though...I don't want you to rush, and you prolly got school now too!
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI, I've read up to about Ch. 17 so far, but I wanted to stop and review because something has been bothering me. I really like the fic, good story, nice characters, it's sweet and interesting. however, around ch. 15, the style seems to change...it get's like the fic is almost...rushed. I felt like i had come back to read it after a day and it was a different author. I think maybe it needs some revision and maybe not to be so rushed...i love that you are a fast updater, but if that means sacrifcing quality, I don't mind waiting the extra few days. I hope you aren't offended by anything I say; I really am a fan of yours and i think you have lot's of potential and great ideas...had I reviewed earlier, your score would have been higher, but now i feel the fic isn't as good as when you first began. if you want me to tell you more please feel free to email me and i will give you more details of what i mean. if you are offended, I apologise and you can just ignore this. Thanks for taking the time to write a good fic, i hope my constructive criticism helps make it even better!
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Reviewed By: mikokitty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love love love this story!!!! i start to not like it when keags and fluffy got together but kept on reading i got caught up in it and all. now i can't wait for the next chapter and cliffies are so not cool. the story is great tho not the cliffy please update soon i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 10:54 CDT
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That chapter was fricking awesome
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