| "Never Gonna Let You Go" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI, I've read up to about Ch. 17 so far, but I wanted to stop and review because something has been bothering me. I really like the fic, good story, nice characters, it's sweet and interesting. however, around ch. 15, the style seems to change...it get's like the fic is almost...rushed. I felt like i had come back to read it after a day and it was a different author. I think maybe it needs some revision and maybe not to be so rushed...i love that you are a fast updater, but if that means sacrifcing quality, I don't mind waiting the extra few days. I hope you aren't offended by anything I say; I really am a fan of yours and i think you have lot's of potential and great ideas...had I reviewed earlier, your score would have been higher, but now i feel the fic isn't as good as when you first began. if you want me to tell you more please feel free to email me and i will give you more details of what i mean. if you are offended, I apologise and you can just ignore this. Thanks for taking the time to write a good fic, i hope my constructive criticism helps make it even better!
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Reviewed By: mikokitty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love love love this story!!!! i start to not like it when keags and fluffy got together but kept on reading i got caught up in it and all. now i can't wait for the next chapter and cliffies are so not cool. the story is great tho not the cliffy please update soon i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 10:54 CDT
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That chapter was fricking awesome
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: August 29, 2006 01:52 CDT
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27 chapters so far. I wonder what the grand total will be. :)
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Title: Mistress Yume (NLI)
Reviewed By: mistress_yume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awesome! and teh ending is such a cliffy! pls update soon!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 11:32 CDT
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nice story so far! thanks for all the updates in a row, gave me something to do while babysitting! thanks again!
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Reviewed By: ShounenBat On: August 27, 2006 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting very interesting. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 23:46 CDT
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Wow. You are a great writer and the story is good. But jeeze the well closing is a huge deal and you just kinda skipped over everyone's reactions to it and jumped into really intense action. Oh well, even though it feels too rushed, I do like it and will keep reading. Good job!
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: August 26, 2006 22:00 CDT
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5 chapters in one day from morning to evening. Even if they're short. Congrats. I like you!
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Title: true killer
Reviewed By: true killer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic finsh it okay ,thaks
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sound great so far please update soon thank you.
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: August 24, 2006 22:57 CDT
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That was fast. Keep posting like that and I'll like you.
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Reviewed By: VJ On: August 24, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Serenity Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story so far. Please continue with other chapters and hopefully and ending. Take it from me, I enjoyed reading this ALOT!! :D
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Reviewed By: Psychlone [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 17:37 CDT
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The description was nice, but could be upplayed some more, it wasn't terribly lacking, but the plot seemed to spill over rather than flow. Also you have a few contextual agreement problems. Is it past or present you're talking about? Just go back and re-read to get rid of any problems and bulk up on some wimpy detailing, and you should be fine.
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