| "What you want" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 17:24 CST
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ooh i really like this one, please update soon kay.
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Reviewed By: Nariel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 04:53 CST
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*NOSEBLEED* ... *gets tissues* Jesus fucking Christ, excuse my expression, but I can't find another... *fans self* Boy that was hot. Holy, holy shit. And it's nice to have a mouth-watering Aya and an angsting Youji, as it is usually the other way around... On the other hand, they are both drool-worthy.... Nevermind, I am not making any sense anyway. -_- Just... WOW.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 23:24 CDT
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wonderful! All of it very, very good, with some truly awesome lines in there. I'm SO glad to have been pointed this way!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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You write a kick ass Aya! Yoji's great of course, but I loved Aya's attitude. And wow, intense. I felt like I was really inside Yoji's mind, seeing everything from Yoji's eyes, even though the story is in third person. I also thought it was cool that there's no consciousness that Yoji is drunk, which seems realistic because it's something that should be far more evident to other people than oneself. (or so I think; haven't had so much first hand experience :P)
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 12:56 CDT
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this is one of my favorite interpretations of Aya that i've ever read. and boy, i've read a hell of a lot of 'em. i LOVE his aggressive sexuality and dominance, topping from the bottom as they say. scorching, beautiful, brilliant. :)
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Reviewed By: Heta Noitio nsi On: September 10, 2006 06:13 CDT
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... I'm just going to go and wipe my drool off my chin. (And no 'I love you's anywhere! Brownies for you. ^^) This was hot. Like, I-have-just-been-six-hours-out-in-the-sun-hot.
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 03:44 CDT
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Loved the fic. You're a great writer and I hope you write others!
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Reviewed By: Rabid Rabbit On: August 24, 2006 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! The writing style portrays Yohji's personality very well, and I love the way Aya appears in the story. He's not the usual cookie-cutter Aya; this one has some personality to him! I especially liked the ending. I did, however, find the fic a little too short. A little more exploration into the characters might have helped, though I do like the story how it is. I adore your writing and hope that you keep the fics coming!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 13:07 CDT
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love the fic! *squee* love the disclaimer *double squee* write more (fics, not disclaimers. Hmm, you might need other disclaimers too. Hmm fics and disclaimers)
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