| "Eyes of a Hunter" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Title: Very Sexy
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting start, can't wait to see where you go with this. Happy writing.
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Title: Eyes of a Hunter
Reviewed By: Sylla On: September 15, 2006 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do enjoy this story and would enjoy a lot more if you continue, so PLEASE!!!!! continue!
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it would be interesting to see where you go with it so please update~*~
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: August 23, 2006 07:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
An interesting setup just a few questions (take or leave as you may) 1. Shouldn't Kagome be a little more familiar / relaxed in the park? It was closer to what she had known in the past. Therefore she should have known the sounds. 2. Why didn't Kagome recognize that she was dealing with a demon? (there should have been demon energy though you don't mention it) She had seen the red eyes and he called her nigan (sp) a couple of times. That should have tipped her off and her reaction should have been along the lines of purification. (Unless she has some how lost her powers) She has always hit a problem head on before (perhaps a bit foolishly before) Anyhow it is a good start to a story and I hope you write more soon
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squee. Very good. I must have more PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE. Is it bad I find so much enjoyment out of it? LoL Very good writing, I like your style. ^^
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