| "Animus" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Chapter 6: Poor KJ...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2009 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, the proclamation of amore was just darling on Mary's part and made me a happy camper but poor shy KJ. Mary's kinda bold in her own shy way, huh? Go, Mary! LOL! I loved this chapter because it made me smile and blush and showed a furthering of their relationship. Wonder when KJ'll be brave enough to return the sentiment...
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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 11:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
um, that was so kind of PC glitch...that comment was for a Inu/Izayoi ONESHOT from another author (and i have NO idea how it got in your notes)--sorry.
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Title: now, that was original! ^_^
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sweet and beautiful...i added it to my favs, too!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 18:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have written an interesting story so far. I hope in future chapters you will explain more of exactly what has happened to Inuyasha, who is taking care of him now that Kagome has gone after Sesshoumaru, and why Sesshoumaru did to Inuyasha what he did. You have done a very good job of drawing in the interest of the reader. There are enough hints of the backstory to keep us intrigued, but not enough to let us know everything. The only thing about the story that seems a little off is the witch/dark miko/sorceress. We have seen very few Inuyoukai in cannon (one if I am remembering right) It seems a little too easy that she would have just the right concoction to trap an Inuyoukai in a little over 24 hours. I look forward to reading future chapters of this piece.
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Title: Chapters 1 & 2
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 21:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! Such intrigue, mystery and suspense; as well as wonderfully written. This promises to be an excellent story and I am impressed with your writing skill. I will be watching for updates. Snowfall
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would seem that Kagome has found whom it was she was seeking, but what else is on her mind at the moment....interesting....good chapter. Update when you can.
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Title: Animus
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: happylama2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 16:57 CDT
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Wow... a story with a Dark Kagome that has a plausible motivation. And a Kagome/Sesshomaru interaction that is something other than plotless warm fuzzy drivel. I'm completely impressed! You're on my favorites list, I'm looking foward to more. Go you!
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Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: August 25, 2006 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been very intersting. I like where you're going with this plot. Update, soon. Chanda
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: August 23, 2006 16:53 CDT
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I'm intrigued. I'd love to know exactly what happened to Inuyasha. I'm betting Sesshoumaru had something to do with this. Exactly what kind of revenge does Kagome have planned? Please update as soon as you can.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this most intriguing I must say. What is it that happened to InuYasha that has Kagome SO angry and bitter that she would be on a trip such as this? And what, exactly, is she planning to do with whatever it is the witch gave her? And who all else, if anyone, is involved? Interesting...Oh yea, you sparked my interest, lol. Anyways, update when you can. :D
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