| "Working out the Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Title: Phew
Reviewed By: Hatealone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 07:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful. thats the right words to describe this story.
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Reviewed By: Shiromaus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just in case: I'm no native speaker, so please don't mind the mistakes. Nevertheless I just wanted to tell you how much I love this fic of yours. It was just a coincidence to find it, but now I'm eagerly going on reading the sequels. I really like the way you describe the characters and their development. I read the story in a couple of days, really looking forward to each new chapter. Thanks for this masterpiece. It's one of the best KKM-Stories I've ever read. Characters, descriptions and the storyline itself...great!!
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Reviewed By: KiaYamato [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Da story's really interestin. Btw, u made a mistake somewhere around the part Yuuri started crying. You wrote "But Yuuri was only human, like all of them."
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Title: hot~
Reviewed By: kaesaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
really hot! ..love the story! and f'course the pairing~ m'glad it has a happy ending! write more yuuriXwolfram! ^_^
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Reviewed By: whitelilacs On: April 22, 2007 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. So well written and everything. I loved the development, it was very well done. You seemed to hit the character's personalities very well in this story. =D Looking forward to reading your next Yuuri x Wolfram fic. :D
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, Amazing, Bravo! Can you believe I read this all in one night? I couldn't go to sleep without knowing how it ended. Nice work :)
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 10:43 CST
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this was great keep up the good job. i really love this fanfic, hope you'll update soon.
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Title: Part 21- - Final Chapter
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 21:02 CST
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Wow, I can't believe it's over already. =( I'm glad though that you ended it so well with that intimate scene between Yuuri and Wolfram. I mean, sure, they didn't go all the way, but I suppose I'll have that to look forward to in the sequel you're currently writing. ^^ You've definitely left it at a place where this still much more to write about so a sequel would be great. ;) I truly enjoyed reading this fic since it was so full of passion and emotion. Here's to the sequel! *cheers*
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Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaaaaaaaaay~~~~ happy ending~ with possible sequel~~! @_@ i love happy ending~ with possible sequel~~~~ **hugs** Good Luck!!!!! n_____________n i really really really liked this story~~~~~ awesome.
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Title: **kudos****!!
Reviewed By: asialisek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a kewl story~~~ i love the twists!! of course, if it were possible, this could turn out an awesome long series... but of course, you aren't chained to a desk and only given food when you dish out a new chapter.. sooo.... that can only be a dream at this point.. but.. it does emphasize how much i like what you've done with the series! ne? i hope it does. Please add more as soon as you can~~~~ **CHEERS YOU ON** **CHEER CHEER GANBATE~~~~~~!!**
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 04:49 CST
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Wand of intelligence RAOTFLMAO! That has to be one of the best lines I've heard in a long time! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: marevil On: February 26, 2007 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
yay there back home
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Title: Part 20
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 13:18 CST
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I have to say, I really do enjoy reading your style of writing. You deserve any and all compliments I give you. ^^ Don't worry about Yuuri being believable or not even though I think he is. I mean, going from oen mindset to the other isn't instantaneous. He still has habits from his paranoid days and issues he needs to work out, meaning he's not perfect. The way you portray him makes him feel even more genuine in his actions. That was cute and funny at the end of Part 20. It was nice to see more character development and power progression. Their interaction is delightful and I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Parts 11-19
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 05:11 CST
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Hey there! ^^ It's been a little while since I've been able to get caught up on the story but I finally did and I must say it was wonderful. The main difference for me from the earlier chapters to the chapters I just got caught up on was the level of intimacy. Just as I said before, the gradual way you progress the relationships is enjoyable to read and believable. I truly loved reading Yuuri's transformation and seeing more of Wolfram's true emotions. Shori fit in really well and I love how big bro was there to help them both, especially Wolfram. It's important for the family to like the fiance after all. ;) I liked the way that Earth was basically a learning experience for Wolfram; with time it looks like some of his opinions on Earth could change. Not all of them of course. ;) There's still so much of the story left too that I can't wait to read! ^^ I anxiously await and hope to read more of their progressing relationship before they're transported back to Shin Makoku and have to deal with all their problems there. Hell, they still have problems to deal with on Earth. ^^ Oh, and about my comment before about chapter length, it was a compliment on the actual lengthiness of the individual chapters you write. I find some authors tend to write too little in a chapter and it doesn't feel complete or flow properly as a result. Yours, however, flow nicely and each chapter feels complete and ready to lead into the next. Anyways, just wanted to let you know that I still enjoy your story and still look out for any updates. Hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 05:07 CST
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this was really really hot, keep up the great work. please update soon
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