| "Working out the Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Title: Parts 11-19
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 05:11 CST
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Hey there! ^^ It's been a little while since I've been able to get caught up on the story but I finally did and I must say it was wonderful. The main difference for me from the earlier chapters to the chapters I just got caught up on was the level of intimacy. Just as I said before, the gradual way you progress the relationships is enjoyable to read and believable. I truly loved reading Yuuri's transformation and seeing more of Wolfram's true emotions. Shori fit in really well and I love how big bro was there to help them both, especially Wolfram. It's important for the family to like the fiance after all. ;) I liked the way that Earth was basically a learning experience for Wolfram; with time it looks like some of his opinions on Earth could change. Not all of them of course. ;) There's still so much of the story left too that I can't wait to read! ^^ I anxiously await and hope to read more of their progressing relationship before they're transported back to Shin Makoku and have to deal with all their problems there. Hell, they still have problems to deal with on Earth. ^^ Oh, and about my comment before about chapter length, it was a compliment on the actual lengthiness of the individual chapters you write. I find some authors tend to write too little in a chapter and it doesn't feel complete or flow properly as a result. Yours, however, flow nicely and each chapter feels complete and ready to lead into the next. Anyways, just wanted to let you know that I still enjoy your story and still look out for any updates. Hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 05:07 CST
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this was really really hot, keep up the great work. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 03:08 CST
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Damn and to think that a little fun in the bedroom almost lead to a loss of life. Lol puts whole new meaning to safe sex ne? Anywho update soon k!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 05:39 CST
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Lol another great chapter, all hot and sexy! Ahh boys and their toys! I can't wait for the next update, things seem to be progressing wonderfully.
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Reviewed By: YUURI EIRI On: January 31, 2007 15:05 CST
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I ALWAYS LOVE YOUR STORY, YOU ARE MY IDOL, SO UPDATE SOON PLEASE, BYE
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Title: update soon please kay
Reviewed By: jujubean On: January 22, 2007 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i bet kyota i going to be shocked when he finds out whats going on. i hope yuuri and kyota get in a fight. your stories rock i hope you update soon, same goes for heavy bond.
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Title: every chapter was great
Reviewed By: marevil On: January 22, 2007 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to update soon.
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Title: Ya there together :)
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 21:15 CST
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yes there together now and its about time. i can't wait til they get back. i hope Yuri and Kyota get in a fight. i don't know why but i think it would be pretty hot them fighting over wolfram and i think wolfram would agree. anyway i can't wait to see what happens next so update soon kay :)
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 12:26 CST
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LMAO so they finally fixed it. About damn time is all I can say though I'm pretty sure the shit is gonna hit the fan when they get back to the demon kingdom. Lol what was really funny was Yuri saying he had to warn Shori about them leaving the house. Well can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 05:39 CST
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Damn and the shit goes on! Now Wolfram is pissed and I highly think that he's just gonna forgive Yuri for his mistake seeing as how he caused it to begin with. I can't wait for the next update this is hella good!
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Reviewed By: YUURI EIRI On: January 03, 2007 18:49 CST
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OHHH, I DONT LIKE THE KYOTA DUDE ANYMORE I HATE HIM!!!!!! STUPID IDIOTIC WOLFRAM, IS HE BLIND OR SOMETHING? IS SOOO OBVIOUS THAT YUURI IS JEALOUS!YUURI LOVES HIM ,WHY CAN'T WOLF SEE THAT? BYE THE WAY NICE WORK I LIKE IT SO MUCH, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: YUURI EIRI On: January 03, 2007 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHHH, I DONT LIKE THE KYOTA DUDE ANYMORE, POOR YUURI, STUPID WOLFRAM YUURI LOVES HIM!!!!! IS HE BLIND OR SOMETHING? PLEASE UPDATE SOON, PLEASE, I REALLY LIKE YOUR FIC.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 09:20 CST
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wolfram should have just followed yuri. i can't belive wolfram and yuri's brother would think something like that. but the argument with yuri and his brother was funny.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry but i just think that wolfram is cute when he's angry thats why he's my favorite, you really can't call him hot it doesn't suit him. the only ones i think are hot is Günter von Kleist,Konrad Weller,Gwendal von Walde,and Yuri Shibuya(only when he turns into the demon king, but when he's not he's cute). so i just thought that your story was cute because i like how wolfram is in the story. but i'll try my best not to say cute kay.
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Title: Wolfram engaged?!?!?!
Reviewed By: Yuuramfan On: December 29, 2006 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wolfram's engaged? Aww that sucks. What's funny was I reading this and Hurt was playing in the background. It sorta matched, but whatever. LOVED YOUR STORY! Hope to read more soon.
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