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| "On The Wings Of An Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 18:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Me again! Its okay if you cant get up the nerve...its the same problem Im having with my own fan fictions, lol. Its okay for short chapters too, Im eagerly awaiting the next one though! This is really good!
| Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its completely original thats for sure. Ive never seen a Jean/Al fan fic but its definitly not something that repulses me. Personally Im a fan of Riza/Jean fan fics but this isnt half bad! You should put some more characteristics with the demon and angel stuff. Is Roy a demon? Cause that would be funny. If Roy was a demon and Ed was an angel. The whole Jean being a wolf thing was great! This is a really good story, keep it up!
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