| "Family Ties Part 2: Children of a Blessed Union" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: WackieJackie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 06:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good start. I think it could use some work in the plot area. i would like to see more 'umph'! More surprise, and more things that have to do with Miaka and Tasuki.
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Title: this is GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: Alearah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're a fantastic writer! this fic is one of the best i've read now and it's great. i just wanted you to know how much i now deeply respect your fanasy (and you ofcours). though i must say that it was quite obvious that Tamahome would come back. a little more suprises would make the fic even better. ^^; anyway, nice work and i can hardly wait for the next chapters to come.
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Reviewed By: inuyashasramen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 12:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool story!! Please continue! ^^
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