| "Flowers in the Sand" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 12:17 CST
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I'M GOING TO FUCKING KILL KABUTO WHEN I GET MY CLAWS ON HIM!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 12:08 CST
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Me:I SHALL JOIN THE KILLING SPREE! *Changes into my demon form* KABUTO SHALL DIE! MUWHAHAHAHAHA! Neji: *severly injured* Dude woman, you scare me. Me: GOOD!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 11:58 CST
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Poor Gaara-Chan... I want hi to be happy! *Glares at Neji* KILLING SPREE! *attacks Neji*
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 11:47 CST
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I say...THIS IS AWESOME! Wonder how my favorite Sand-boy'll act.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 07:26 CST
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O.O I'll pretend I have no idea what they were hinting at.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 07:16 CST
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YAY! SHE CAN SEEEEE!!!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 07:07 CST
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Me:Poor Safia....I'll kick the people who did taht to her's asses! I have a foul temper and they'll see who's boss! *Gaara simply stares at me*
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 10:45 CST
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WEEEE!!! *stops and glares muraderously at you* GAARA IS MINE DAMN IT! MINE!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 10:38 CST
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Gaara's eyes are pale green. Some call it sea foam green. When Gaara said: "I am not dead yet." It sounds like me. I say that to my friends when they ask how I am. I am so emo. That's okay though. I like it. Poor Gaara. I want to show him that he is different from that bastard ratccoon. He was only harboring the demon. That does not make him a demon only the demon's vessal. I wish I could tell him that...*cries* But I can't! I can't meet him! *cries harder* *someone pokes my shoulder and I stop crying and sniffle* Yeah? * turn and pounce on the person* GAARA! *tells him my views and cuddles him*
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 10:26 CST
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You did fine with the fight scene. Don't worry too much. If I had been there when Gaara got hurt I would have spazzed and carried him back myself (even though I'm so damn tiny).
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 10:12 CST
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OOOOHHH!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 09:40 CST
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Wow...
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 09:22 CST
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SHE'S BLIND!!!!????
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 06:26 CST
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SWEET! TIS AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 13:07 CST
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Poor girl. I feel for her. I love the story.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 12:54 CST
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AWWW! *hugs Gaara* He's so lovable! *Gaara twitches* GREAT CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 12:42 CST
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OOOH! O.O Can't wait to see what happens! Poor Naru. Being teased. Never fun.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 07:30 CST
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Love the story! And I've only read the first chapter!
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Title: Flowers in the Sand
Reviewed By: Twilight Garden On: December 23, 2006 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good story and the reason that I read was because the drawings for this story intrigued me into reading it. You had me going there believing that Sasuke was the bad guy and it was good even though he was not a bad guy. It made me want to smack Neji and Gaara for being so slow and not realizing that Tenten and Safaia were in love with them. I really liked the fact that it had a happy ending of sorts. I hope to read the sequel as well. This story was just great I really liked it alot.
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Title: I AM BACKKKKKK!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: nejiten4ever!! On: November 14, 2006 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am back and i am sorry for not reviewing in such a long time but i had 'issues' with my computer and stuff. sigghhhh. Anyways i wanted to say that it was a good ending but i wanted to see was what going on with everybody else? what happened during the last couple years? don't leave us hanging! we want to know!! maybe you could write a short story telling what happed? but anyways i am looking forward to the sequel and/or the short story (if you write it) and again i am so sad to see this story end!!!!:( Ja ne!!!! XD
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Reviewed By: Wandering Soul1014 On: October 26, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm looking foward to the sequal.
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