| "Flowers in the Sand" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, great couple of chapters. You don't give yourself enough credit, you definately write some good action scenes. I like how you realistically evolved the characters' moves (the way you keep realistic to the series is one of the best things you've done with this fanfic). And Kaze no Kizu for Temari is a great idea for an attack, it actually makes more sense than Inuyasha using it. Thanks for writing, and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: DarkestDragon102894 On: September 10, 2006 15:57 CDT
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KEEP UPDATING DAMMIT! Sorry about that, but I REALLY, REALLY want to read more!
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 18:44 CDT
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OOOOOOOh. this fic is sweet! write! Write i say!
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Reviewed By: MysticalAnimeWarrior_of_Passion_33 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 16:41 CDT
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OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! Please let Safaia go with Gaara and let Neji get a girl as well!But let neji see them kissing at the battle scene so he'll understand better, and he'll go with... Tenten.Yeah...Tenten is good.And they can all be friends in the end!
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Reviewed By: DarkestDragon102894 On: September 09, 2006 12:09 CDT
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Please continue updating your story! I want to know how they will get Safaia and Sakura back! :D
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Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter, as is usual for this story. I can't wait to see the beat down Naruto and Gaara give to Kabuto. I hope that you focus more on the progress Naruto and Gaara have made since becoming Kages. I know this story is more focused on the love between Gaara and Safaia, but I would still enjoy seeing that. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good update. I've said it once, and I'll say it again. This series is probably the most true to the show Naruto fanfic I've ever read. No one is obscenely powerful, everyone is mostly in character, it's all good.
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Reviewed By: DarkestDragon102894 On: September 07, 2006 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey, when are you gonna update? I'm not rushing you or anything, but I would appreciate it if you do it soon. I want to know what Sakura's plan is.
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Reviewed By: DarkestDragon102894 On: September 05, 2006 20:07 CDT
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Keep updating please! You are doing such a great fanfic! : )
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Reviewed By: ren-hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:29 CDT
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sorry if i didnt leave a comment so im leaving one now. so have any idea how many chapters are going to be in the fic. well its really good like i said before and if safaia went with gaara or neji, will the other man be left umloved? i was just curious so e-mail me if you want to answer that but then again you dont have to well see ya later.
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Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still great. I'm enjoying this story a lot.
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Reviewed By: japhy On: September 01, 2006 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I am really enjoying the plot build up so far and the character interactions. Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: DarkestDragon102894 On: August 30, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Keep up the good work! : )
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Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fanfic. You are one of the few writers who can actually make this seem like it really could be in Naruto. Please keep up the good story.
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Reviewed By: ren-hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 12:20 CDT
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its sooo good keep it up!!
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