| "From Way Before" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: gerigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i find the story itself very intriquing since it's usually goku who has to bring everyone together to remember their shared past history. as for the rating i find that the author has original ideas that blend this story together for me to anticipate when the next chapter shall be posted i would love to see how sanzo goes about getting gojyo and goku and let's not forget hakkai together to finish there journey to the west. the only thing i got confused with is why did he seek out hakkai first and not goku the love of his past and present life?
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Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 00:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
When will there be more of this? Its great!
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Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow ^^ that was very enjoyasble ^-^ I loved your word choices and the way you worded and described things as well, very nice! I do hope that you plan more, it would be a shame to merely leave it at this.... what a darn drop off. This story feels very well thought out and everything ^-^
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool interesting start...so sanzo remembers hakkai? but not Goku? or at least not goku calling him?
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