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| "The White Towers" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: AnonymousAutumn (Too lazy to log in) On: October 15, 2014 08:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! You've made a nice AU fic (I like those)! A TyKa, too!
Continue pls?
| Reviewed By: I love TyKa On: March 22, 2007 10:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE. It have been ages......
| Reviewed By: The Owner of the Jade Dranzer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya! okay, so this one's pretty nice, n i especially lyk the skul name... it helps in piling up suspense n thrill. oh btw,i didnt get daichi's admission, i mean, he's much younger to takao, then how cum dey get in skul in the same yr? or maybe, i havnt gone thru it properly, coz i m feelin very sleepy rite now;) sry if i m wrong! oh, one more thing, extend the battles a bit more if u can, coz dats one of the best things abt beyblade, the passion n pleasure of playing the game, u cud put in sum more strong emotions there. lastly, update soon, m waitin for the nxt part. hope i get dat soon now u r finally free again. n yeah, update dat other fic on tyka soon plz... u havnt put the last part here, rite? the one i read on fanfiction.net? plz update soon, okay? bye den... PS : reveiew my fic too plz. its dat one ' Boy! Dont mess with Hilary or Kai!'
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