| "Cheating Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 101 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: February 10, 2008 21:27 EST
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Wow! Ok I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the way you portray Souta as more then just the naïve little brother and more of an insightful character. I can picture Ami in my mind and believe me she looks adorable. I also like how she reminds Kagome of Inuyasha so much. Making Ami and Inuyasha look so similar was an evil but smart move. Well I can't wait to see how Inuyasha will try to become a part of Ami's life and what Kagome is going to do about the Kouga/Inuyasha situation. Kanna
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 21:01 EST
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Well this was an exciting moment. Althought, Inuyasha honestly had no right for being upset when it was clearly his fault! That just frustrated me to no end. I swear I feel like smacking that guy so hard to smack some sense into him! I am looking forward to reading more though.. Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 18:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so the cats out of the bag now... and inuyasha's reaction was quite normal along with kagome's... what with all the yelling... what will happen now... inuyasha now knows but what will he do... what will kagome do... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 13:23 EST
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He finally found out!!!! That was just the reaction that most men do and it was written wonderfully! good Job!
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 13:22 EST
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He finally found out!!!! That was just the reaction that most men do and it was written wonderfully! good Job!
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Reviewed By: Makala On: November 02, 2007 16:13 EDT
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When will the next chapter be written up
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Reviewed By: hanssonntag On: October 03, 2007 00:00 EDT
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I love this story so much please update it p.s. this is on my fav list on my comp
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Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: September 29, 2007 23:31 EDT
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i love the chapter. i can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
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Title: BIG ACK!!!
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: September 23, 2007 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! don't end there (whaa!!) i want to read other Chapter please (sniff) the chapters are perfect there long which is prefect. this story reminds me of serendipity the movie everything and everybody is tied in by inuyasha and kagome it is cool not many people could pull off writing that but you pull it off very well. Please update soon thanks.^_^ (smile)
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Reviewed By: silverandardiel On: September 22, 2007 05:41 EDT
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Its not a bad fic but I admit (and no ofense) I don't enjoy it as much as your other fic 'Well La De Frickin' Da'. I look forward to your updates on that fic.
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Reviewed By: klachcik On: September 21, 2007 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story, it's really dramatic and drama makes everything awesome i also really like the flashbacks, they're probably my favorite part
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 10:30 EDT
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Awesome story! I sat on the edge of my seat waiting for Inuyasha to actually smell the similarities of scents, but I guess he didnt. This is a fantastic story, and I certainly can't wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 00:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... when will inuyasha find out about ami... what will happen when he finds out... what will kagome do... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: still? Still? STILL?
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What does Inutyasha mean she still torn up about that???? That jerk! he left her a d*mn baby and even if he didtn I'd still be torned up if i was kagome if someone cheated on me with a ditzy cheerleader!!! Goodness I just want to burn Inu right now! I'm just so happy u updated though!!! I thought you gave up! Im SOOOO glad u didnt i LOVE your story PLZ update soon again!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ ur a great writer!!! and ur story is just uh!..so WOW one of the best Ive ever read!!! and i've been reading fanfiction since I was seven!!!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 21:33 EDT
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oh funny! i cant wait to see what happens next. keep up the great work!
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