Reviewed By:Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 17:45 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I have read your story up to chapter 19 and something just struck me. Why hasn't Ren used any of his shaman skills, and why has Bason been so quiet? And isn't Pin-Mei a shaman? And if so why hasn't she used any of her skills yet?