| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: DemonSaya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMAO!!! OMG!!!! Oh...*Pant* WTF...hurry and write another chapter before I die laughing, please...Hoooo.... I almost peed myself...
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Reviewed By: Nikiz bad habit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 22:01 CST
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Your writing is superb! I just love your stories. They always leave me wanting more, the suspense, the drama, the romance. This story has some wonderful aspects that I can't wait to see where they lead. The idea that Mikos are used to power the city is very cool. I wonder if the weapons Sesshomaru was talking about, are made by Kagome and she doesn't even know. I'm excited to see how Inuyasha will react with Kagome, and what is past relationship with Kikyo was like. Will the Shikon be in this story, is that whats hurting Kagome? I think I read that this story is only supposed 8-10 chapters, is that true? Well I'm looking forward to reading more from you and this story. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Hoshizora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 22:47 CST
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Oh...new story. I loved that last line by Miroku...XD
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter there. Guess Miroku got his way after all, lol. Should be interesting to see where this is going, with the way Inu loves to bate his brother and the lecher being his lecherous self, lol. Cant wait to see what happens next. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 17:50 CDT
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Magnificent chapter. i like how this one continues to unfold. Already I can't help but marvel at the relationships as they begin to unfold. Looks good so far. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Yukisan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bounces up and down* i love where this is going!!! i can't wait til the next chapter. you are great at the really funny scenes, which i love, and mystery of this lab. i have to know what is really going on? what happened to hojo, our cute little hojo? what is this lab? What part does kagome have? will inuyasha save her? i think i'm gonna burst from all thesse exciting questions! lol. good luck, i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: FaBzZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 12:49 CDT
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I realy liked this chapter.The ending was real funny.well update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this pleae update soon.
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Reviewed By: Yukisan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O wow, this is really great! i love how you twisted the story and the suspense is killing me! your detail is exquisite and beautifully done! it's very capitvating and i simply have to have more! it seems that you have done your homework very well and i will look forward to the next chapter. good luck. in the meantime, i think i'll check out beautiful miscommunications.
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Title: Looks good!
Reviewed By: Bumbleflies and Butterbees [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the suspense. You have a way of writting that makes me sit on the edge of me seat the whole time. I'm so excited for this one. It sounds good! Can't wait til next time. Til Then. Happy Writting! PS. Thanks for the reply. It's nice to know that you REALLY read the reviews we read.
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 06:54 CDT
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I truly enjoyed this, its fresh and different and twists a story may have made an attemp at telling but never quite succedded the way I'm hoping this does. The writing was clear and powerful and the characters believable. Altogether I had a great time reading this!
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Reviewed By: Dea Mariella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 17:43 CDT
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hmm...i like where this is going. it seems to be well thought-out, and your sense of description is impeccable. i take it that this is set in the future... i would love to see sesshoumaru's home! it sounds absolutely beautiful! but where did he pick up rin from? hmm...this has some interesting elements...looking forward to seeing more!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is interesting. Cant say Ive read one quite like this one before. You had me hooked the first paragraph. I love how Inu can push Sesshomaru's buttons. Should be interesting where on where/how this goes. Please, continue, but update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 17:12 CDT
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Yes, it isn't chapter 25...but at the same time I loved the intro and look forwards to reading more. So it's a win-win scenario anyway. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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