| "Life Falters" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: future author On: October 20, 2006 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. i wonder what inuyasha and miroku are going to do and i wonder what kind of car is kagome going to get. update soon and keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 11:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, girl! I'm glad you seem to be continuing with this one. Good luck. Gotta go, I'm, already falling asleep as I'm typing this review. I still have an exam tomorrow. Argh!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I can't wait for more, so keep on writing
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was iight. but i stilll want to finish reading it .
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whooo! Kagome and Miroku... it makes me wonder what he said to get her to comply. Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter, though it does leave me to wonder what exactly happened to Kagome with her last boyfriend. Will you be explaining it anytime soon? Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster not signed in On: September 15, 2006 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep updating please, i love this last chapter, DEFINATLY a twist, never read one where miroku was with kags at first... i think its great how Inuyasha's gettin all jealous lol, must read the next chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 20:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, sis! I have yet to read the second chapter you sent me, I'm swamped with school work! I hope your muse stays with you for this one. Happy writings!
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Title: Reya
Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed writing this first instalment of your fic. I think you should continue it. You are doing great so far. Please update soon!
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