| "Black Velvet" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
okay, all caught up! Bring on the smut!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Lovely Aya and Aurora moment; Schuldig is chasing Crawford again, who is willing to be caught; and great humor to end the chapter. Who could ask for more, other than to hope for more soon?
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yum, first a possible proposal coming from Aya -- and a shocker if Yohji turns out to be correct, then a Brad acting quite out of character (in a good, and for this story believeable way) possibly moving Schuldig to finally show his appreciation. Loving every minute.
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Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 17:03 CST
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Oooooh, this part just melted me and has inspired a bunch of fantasies. Hell, if Schu doesn't jump on him in this get up, he's out of luck, cause I will.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 20:31 CST
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hehe i have to agree w/ KD's comment, it says it all
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Title: I'mmmmm Baaaaaaack!!!
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: January 14, 2007 22:38 CST
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I finally have internet connection again! Hopefully I can get back to everyone's updates now. God, you're being so teasing again! I need to know what is going on with Aya and Yohji! I've been out for a month and I'm in serious withdrawal!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 13:03 CST
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I'm finally caught up again! And, wow! I'm missed a lot. The more I find out about Brad's past, the less I want to know. My kudos to Skye and Star and their expert handling in both the past and present. I'm looking forward to the "conversation" between Brad and Schu! Also, I find the idea of Aya pregnant both hysterically funny and somewhat disturbing. As always, your story is amusing and upsetting in turns. However, it is always engaging and well written! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 08:46 CST
Comment/Review:
for the love of smut, will you write faster?
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 16:39 CST
Comment/Review:
beyond my usual plea for more AxY (which i recall you used to indulge more often *pout*), i am fascinated, enthralled even (think snagglepuss voice)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 21:29 CST
Comment/Review:
*drools herself into dehydration* More please!
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Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 17:00 CST
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OH, I have been long remiss in reading and reviewing, but I'll carry the image of shirtless, sweaty Brad in jeans forever. Hot damn! As the chick said, too bad he's not into women in this fic. I'd love to change his mind. I really need to go back and read the first fic so I can catch the finer points. Yowza!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 20:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Caught up! You may post more now. :D
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 04:20 CST
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I'm slighly bewildered, yet terribly excited about the future explaination.
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 00:45 CST
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Squeee! *throws confetti* Ooooooh can we have a chapter with Aya trying to propose?! That just hits all my fangirl buttons! Argh!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 22:12 CST
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*is more confused* I need to draw me a map. You create so many engaging characters, I just can't figure out what the heck any of them are doing...
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