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Reviewed By: mm-c On: September 20, 2006 23:02 CDT
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i think i'll agree with the first half of missy's comments...and add where's my aya x yohji????
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: September 20, 2006 22:03 CDT
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Trust Schu to worry about his looks when he's gonna get old. I don't think Brad appreciates Schu enough. Give him another near death experience to pull him into line!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 19:54 CDT
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Oh that is so Schu! "Just as long as I stay pretty." Yep. The chapter has come a long way, but you still managed to keep in suspense. Very curious to find out what's going on behind closed doors!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 21:35 CDT
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mmm, pretty schu... *can't gather brain to say more*
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 21:54 CDT
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I like the light ending, a perfect close to what could have been an overwhelming chapter. So much...intrigue! I'm looking forward to getting to the heart of the matter! And, of course, having Blaze show up! She rocks! ;-)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 21:51 CDT
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"Or I owe you for ingraining that particular terror into him." why am I here? You are clearly fantastic, and you don't need me to tell you that. (ps, you're fantastic.) (still snickering)
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 08:13 CDT
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I love how schuldig calls them a 'wolf thingy'. More redheaded telepaths! I like Aya getting jealous. Will we see an Preggie Aya or will Yohji be adamant about the condoms?I thought Yohji was bottom anyway? Do they switch? Details! P.S Also loves Crawford's little pain over finding out that Skye got physical with Schu. He deserves the pain, stubborn bastard!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 22:11 CDT
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*hangs head in shame* I suck. You're awesome. Please continue.
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Title: chapter one
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 22:28 CDT
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mmm, I'll throw in a paycheck or two to keep Brad in jeans. *won't mention bribing him OUT of the jeans...* Yay for sequels!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG. WOW. I need more and soon please!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 17:38 CDT
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So glad the the sequel is off to a running start. No doubt it will be as addictive as the original. You're really killing me here...making me feel sorry for Brad and care about the man! What the world think of next?!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 14:05 CDT
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hmm so Crawford's past comes to light and it ain't pretty...
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect title. Although I had a firmly engrained picture of Brad as a midwesterner, a New Orleans bayou Brad fits him perfectly. Aya, Yohji, Brad and Schu together in a sequel I have been anxiously awaiting, and I am certainly not disappointed. I greatly look forward to more.
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Title: aww i wanted to be first
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 19:29 CDT
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but i had/have school work to do *sigh* hmm so crawford's from the swamps? hey i learnt something new today every pirogue i've ever been on (and i've been on a lot) has been motorised, so i had to look up the louisiana pirogues which apparently you punt...interesting
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 18:55 CDT
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So glad that you didn't waste any time in posting the sequel. I'm always up for more of the boys (and alligators, mosquitos, etc.)! And, I'm infinitely pleased that that this saga is continuing. I love it (almost as much as I love you)! (But, I imagine you already knew that...)
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