| "Future Memories Drabbles" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SLAM ! Very good .
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 09:36 CDT
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Chapter 4 was wonderful. A little sad with the part of Hughes and (y)Roy but a great added part. Ed got to be Roy's first! Loved it, keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 09:34 CDT
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I'm back! Did you miss me? Stupid new job, I haven't got to do anything I want cause of working so much. Anyway the chapter about the snide remark was too cute. Loved (y)ed and (o)ed. Guess the little remarks ed comes up with started very young huh? LOL! I'm off to read the rest of what you have done. Hope to see more on this drabble.
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Reviewed By: Queenphoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 19:27 CDT
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o.0 Not as strange?! There are, I believe, TWO Roy Mustangs?
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 17:57 CDT
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Yeah, I agree with littleolmee too, it seems like its making the older mustang really mean and horrible while the younger one is so much nicer...i mean, I realise that the older one has been through so much more but yeah, it seems kinda harsh doesnt it? But its really good, keep writing them! I want one between the older edward and the older mustang because those two seem to need to sort out a lot of issues...
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 08:51 CDT
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OOOh, another one. well done, well done. It was kind of sad though . . . that (o)Roy and (o)Ed relationship is so . . .impersonal I guess would be the word it lead me to. The thought that (y)Roy was kinder and sweeter to (o)Ed is kind of sad. You know? Really like these drabbles can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 19:52 CDT
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LOL, well that's one way to shut up his younger self huh? This is a really interesting idea ZaKai, doing this drabbles. I'll check back for your next one. Have you plans to do one with (o)ed and (o)roy being caught by Trisha?
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