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| "Love's Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: .....
Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: December 24, 2006 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, but due to your 'not so good' (putting it lightly) spelling and grammer, I tended to get distracted from the fic and simply wince at all of the mistakes. I don't mind a few errors, we're only human after all but you had so many that it took away from the enjoyment factor of your entire fic. and that's really not good. I would recomend that you use spellcheck from now on, have someone edit your fics for spelling and grammer, or both. Don't take this personaly, as I'm only giving you constructive critisim so that you may better yourself. Please take the suggestions that I have offered into consideration.
| Reviewed By: humlan_93 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really cute fic. I loved it!!! Please write more fics cause i really liked you style!
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