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| "Sometimes I Just Need Something Sweet" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Calcifer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. That really is an uncommon pairing... I like it. This fic is really good. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep up the good work! ~Angel
| Reviewed By: Ani-chan24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... my... bloody... Ra. I loved this fanfiction!! I've been reading quite a few of your Ouran fics, and I must say, I love them all. Especially this one. Never had I thought of them in such a pairing, Kyouya seemed too serious for Hunny. But this fanfiction made it seem positively perfect. Although I still love Mori with Hunny, you have given me a new loved pairing. I hope you write many more fanfictions, and I plan on reading them all.
| Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great to find a pwp that's actually well-written with respect to grammar and all that jazz. Plus, I totally had a taste for some Host Club hentai! I loved the 'Hunny cake'- that's so cute!!!! The length of the story was just right, and it jumped rigth into the smut. Again, wonderful for a pwp. Still, it would have been fun to have more of a story behind it. It was sort of like a daydream/flashback in that it lacked detail. However, that can be a good thing if you want to leave things to the reader's imagination! That was an odd pairing but I like the fact that you don't stick with the "traditional" yaoi pairings. It's fun to think outside the box sometimes, ne?
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