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| "Jeri's Got a Gun" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Jason Boaz On: August 29, 2002 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was so dark, so twisted and evil. Why'd her eyes turn yellow? It was so awful. I felt sad for Jeri. If I wrote a fanfic about her, I'd NEVER do that to her. However, I'm planning on making a fanfic, where Jeri encounters a Black Gatomon, who needs a human form for a couple of days. She wants to settle an old score with Kari and Angewomon, but feels the Tamers aren't worth her time, and neither is the alternate Earth she's on. She'll be completely like Jeri, skin color and all, until Gatomon comes, and encounters her, a confused Takato and Guilimon who was fooled, because she even had Jeri's scent, until she finally begins to Digivolve. An odd thing is, she'll help patch things up with Jeri's dad. But, when they meet in Highton View Terrace, she'll become Lady Devimon. I'll email you about an alteration request for my upcoming fanfic. All in all, this was a saddening fanfic. | Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brought me to tears... so true so true.. yet soo evil.
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =) | Reviewed By: Silent Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2002 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, it almost made me cry. Very twisted- so I likey. Very very nice | Reviewed By: Kaden Z Fukuyama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2002 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooooooooooo evil goodness. I loved it. I like insane juri, I HATE perky Juri. Great fic. |
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