| "Bento Box Boys" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: KimenoLytra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nuuuuuuuue it soo cannot be done already! That is just not fair! Like really, with both of your endings you leave it open to a second story! And and you made him a VAMPIRE! Poor Domeki-kun having to watch that! Like really, Watanuki-kun just suddenly gets bitten by Kei, becoming a vampire just because he bit the vampire back? Or what? If he hadn't bit the icky Kei back then he wouldn't have become a vampire? I'm sorry I'm just ranting because this made me giggle so much and it made me so happy, except the alternate ending of course. So far this is one of the cutest W/D fan fics that I have read. I personally think that they should get together in that manga but I don't see that happening which is why I read fanfics. Oh and I must compliment your lemons, they are juicy yet they have so much fluff in them. As well I must poing out that your portrayal of Watanuki is so much like the manga, I was truly amazed. So many people just oosh into him being fluffy around Domeki which isn't true at all. With you even though he was fluffy he was still Watanuki. Yay! Now I must read all of your works. Even if they aren't all xXxHolic fics. Another thing. Have you noticed that with a lot of xXxHolic fan fics that Himawari-chan is only mentioned yet she is not a major role. She appears to be rather important, in my opinion, in all of the mangas. Simply because in all the mangas Watanuki-kun is in love with her. Just thought that I would ramble that off. However, if I do manage to read the rest of your fan fics and their is other xXxHolic ones and you have Himawari-chan a major part of your fic, I will have to comment and apologize for this comment. Now onto reviewing my rating. I'm going to rate your fanfic a 10 out of 10 because it was fantastic. However I do have to take one off for spelling and grammar mistakes because there were a few that I spotted. Other then that I must say thank you so much for thinking this fic up and satisying some of my hunger for reading more on xXxHolic. I look forward to seeing what else you have. Hopefully another W/D fic is in store? Alas I must finish this up with yet another thank you. I love your style of writing and I truly hope that it is the same way in every other storie that you have written thus far. Even if the stories are not written in the same context I do believe fully that they will still be amazing works by an amazing author. Sincerely .ni.cho.lee.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 18:53 CDT
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YAY NEW CHAPTER, thats really great, so please write more and write some lemons too.
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Title: Please update soon!!!
Reviewed By: Sirona_Argante [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 17:23 CDT
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This is a great story, and I'd love to read more. Update, please!
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 16:37 CDT
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this wasn't bad at all, a little short but it was good.
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Reviewed By: mel1988 On: February 21, 2007 16:26 CST
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ya you updated now update again
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 22:16 CST
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i absolutely loved it. it was so cute yet sad the way wak. left, damn that witch and her missions. i kinda feel bad for the girl, i wonder will her sprit be at rest? thank you for not forgeting this story and finishing it. i really enjoyed it :}. i have read Straight Guy Sex? and it was really good. i have both of you in for my favorites with a few others.
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON kay
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 10:19 CST
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it's been a couple of months now so WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: mel1988 On: November 13, 2006 09:50 CST
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i'm glade you updated. and i can't wait til the next one YA : }
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 18:35 CST
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hey write more
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Reviewed By: evilfrogger86 On: September 11, 2006 01:32 CDT
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So is that spirit guy gonna try to have his way with them when he becomes human again?
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