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"Where Do Babies Come From?" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]

Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 10:06 CDT
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cute, but it probably could've been a bit drawn out and a little more uncomfortable emotion showing with Kaiba (make us sadistic readers happy) Mokuba was done excellent, I can just imagine him asking his brother like that. One more thing though. No matter what fan-fiction might tell you 'sweatdrop' is not a verb. Don't use it in a story.

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