| "Child of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: annonoumous7 On: April 14, 2007 20:37 EDT
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excelent story progresion, plz dont be too cruel to hillary
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 22:02 EDT
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i wanna kow whats gonna happen!!! so suspensful (sp?) lol anywho awesomeness
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Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: April 07, 2007 18:59 EDT
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Wow! my heart is pounding like a jackhammer! Tell me what's he going to do to her? How to win a women back in 10 days? get another women and make hilary jealous? i can't wait! what's going to happen?!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Aubrey's girl On: April 07, 2007 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual amazing, I love it... Keep it up! can't wait till the next chapter! aubrey_s_girl@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: ladyamazon14 On: March 15, 2007 20:27 EDT
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it took you such a long time to write the next chapter. i was going crazy, though i'm glad you wrote a suspencing chapter. now i'm more on edge for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Aubrey's girl On: March 15, 2007 00:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! can't wait till you post the new chapter! ^.^
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 21:53 EDT
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yep yep. awesome chapter! you NEED to continue! N-E-E-D to continue. lol
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Title: to good to stop here
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story i know i have not review it in a while please for give me busy, busy me... LoL anyways i really want to know what kai's plan is to win Hilary back ... update soon PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: February 01, 2007 17:38 EST
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I forgot the review last time because i was lost for words...and thinking about how will kai and hilary get back together cause it seems like they're getting closer and hiary's not killing him for being atleast within 10 feet of her but it's still a funny chapter and milo did deserve to be dissed by gou.
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Title: i loved it
Reviewed By: Kai adn Hilary fun means love On: February 01, 2007 10:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story like omg, the beginning when kai lefrt was so sad... but now i just omg i hope you updata it soon because this story is just amazing and really funny that sounds like kai. just to get jelous over a playboy-guy you know ... LoL... anyways i really do hope you updata this story soon i enjoyed it a lot.... keep up the great writtin'. love yeah bie bie
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Reviewed By: annonoumous7 On: January 27, 2007 09:35 EST
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Excelent chapter, you could probly set music to it. Wundering where these ideas for stories come from.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 23:04 EST
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am i like....late? but anyway...YAY!!!!!! AWESOME CHAPPIE! oops.....stupid caps.....anyway yeah youve gotta continue! and i gots the feeling talas gonna spy on milo and hilary. im so psykic lol. but anyway. take your time dont hurt yourself. and ill be waiting...*bum bum bum buuuuum*
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Title: JOY!
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: January 02, 2007 15:49 EST
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Awsome! I'll shut up from now on. you have outdone yourself in this one! it's too amazing for words! my e-mail is LadyAmazon14@aol.com
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Reviewed By: anonoumous 7 On: December 31, 2006 19:04 EST
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Thank you for posting so close to the hollidays. If I may, I recomend making the chapters longer. and spacing there posting dates, this has a general affect of a more addictive reading experiance. The chapter was still great :)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 08:04 EST
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Oops! Sorry for the spelling error I wanted to type cant but it turned out as xant. Hilary.*_*
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