| "Unraveling of a Dune" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 22:47 CST
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ah! I can't believe i missed the 7th chapter! i, like, totally skipped it! hee, i cant believe he has pink hair *sniggers* that is sooo cute!! He probably will be made fun of... but thats ok! he will kick their ass!
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Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 22:35 CST
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I agree totally with Sakura123. Gaara x Sakura is definitly an interesting couple. It seems to work out so well, though! excellent story, i absolutely LOVE it. herm, i'd review tons more if my hands didnt hurt from typing...
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Reviewed By: Sakura123 On: October 04, 2006 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story you've written here. I love Gaara and Sakura stories and I seem to be finding more and more of them. Interesting couple to put together but well worth it seeing as you did a great job with the characteristics of the two. Nice ending though with Sakura pregnant and Gaara totally freaked out not knowing what to do. Hope to see some other stories from you, I look forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 21:36 CDT
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that was a funny ending lol XD i can just imagine the after years of this... a very strong child that can control sand and has.. PINK.. HAIR... x_x :P i hope that darkens a bit as he gets older. lol, maybe not. great story! thanks for writing it
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, it's a good story ^^ it doesn't deserve to be a ghost town. update soon! :P hehe
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 15:28 CDT
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Chapter 5 was great! It's good to have a few dark chapters here and there, life really isn't happy all the time. You show Sakura's point of view and Gaara's point of view really well. This whole story is brilliant. Update soon! P.S. Loved the Kakashi "cameo" =P.
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Reviewed By: inu youkai Ashiyame [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAAAHHH!! THIS IS CURRENTLY MY FAVORITE FANFIC!! CONGRATS! And Happy Late Birthday! *throws confetti* GEEZ, YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING AUTHOR! I know how you kept saying that each chapter kept feeling more and more different, but I actually like how it is. I think that you mold each chapter into the story perfectly, so don't worry. ^.^ And you DEFINITELY need to make a GaaxSaku AU. Screw Itachi. XD Or you could do both. But I'm definitely routing for Gaara! Gah I'm really addicted to this fanfic >.< DON'T FORGET TO KEEP UPDATING! I'm gonna check back frequently for updates ^_^
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 14:42 CDT
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Happy birthday! And it seems like the readers got a gift too with two new chapters up. Yay! Chapter three was so cute. Gaara is just so adorable. I'm wondering why Gaara left too. I can't wait to find out. Haha, and I'm glad that your plan didn't work out, that means more chapters for us!
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 05:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! you updated!!! ^.^ i so happy! oooo why did gaara run away like that? O_o i MUST know! :D hehe, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 00:40 CDT
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I vote for the GaaraxSakura AU! =D Anyway, please update soon! I've been checking like everyday, I'm just so excited for the next chapter. And I agree with aoidragon, this story deserves more reviews =D.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 22:07 CDT
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what??? such a great story with so little reviews?!?!?! i'll have to fix that! :D ooo please update soon, this is kewl O_o i loves it. favorites! addeth this story!!!!...-eth. yea. ok! :) oh, btw, i say gaara/saku :p
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 20:32 CDT
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like it
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Reviewed By: Sabrina Usagi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh that was sooooo super awesome... needless to say I like it. I'm looking forwad to the next chapter but please don't make it be the last... oddly enough I see how well those two fit together
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 18:26 CDT
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That last chapter was great. Gaara is so adorable when he's not doing any senseless killings. Ahh, it's sad that next chapter might be last, but I know firsthand that it can be hard to drag out a story. I don't mind, if it's a nice ending =D. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 22:28 CDT
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Oh, by the way, you captured Gaara's character very well, in my opinion. =D
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far! I can't wait for you to update. Gaara is one of my favorite characters.
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