| "Bad Influences" Reviews/Comments [ 344 ] |
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 19:47 EST
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Really enjoying the story so far! Great job about dropping clues to the big mystery...really keeps you guessing! I look forward to the next update!!!!
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Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 09:53 EST
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You dedicated the chapter to me! **blushes** Thanks! Wasn't expexcting it. Very nice chapter, finally things are moving a bit and the truth is gonna come out. I was laughing at Kagome jumping Inuyasha. LOL! Don't want to sound like a nit-picker but the grammer in this chap was a little off, perhaps because you were in a hurry to post it? (I do that a lot!) Anyhow, it was nothing major. Great chapter, keep up the good work! ~~~~~~Briana
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Reviewed By: werxa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 09:33 EST
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hahah, I hope naxt chapter is about what happened to Inu (IT BETTER BE, OR...)
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Reviewed By: Neko7777 On: November 30, 2007 00:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i really do love your story, i love the storys where inu and kags go to school together, are you gonna have inu put a move on kags soon? cause, and im not trying to flame i swear, but there relationship is kinda... dragging. Im not being mean, or at least im not trying to be, but you did say you wanted something more then, "i love your story" right? :) Anyway, i hope you update really soon, i miss the next chap already, and i just read your story today...
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Reviewed By: Mabbline991220 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 15:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter but I really would like to know what happened to Inuyasha and his friends and why he doesn't want to live with his family Does it have to deal with my mom or something????
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Reviewed By: Nika_Tamori [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 21:54 EST
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I read your story before and just found it again and it is as good as I remebered it to be. I can't wait to find out what happened with InuYasha, Mako and Satoshi (I hoped I spelt the names right). I would be forever grateful if it happened to be claified soon. Later!!
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Reviewed By: snowfire2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 13:36 EST
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i really love your story..its refreshing from all the other ones i've recently ready about the "bad boy" "good girl" types..i really got hooked after the first paragraph of this story and i hope souta will wake up soon... oooh and i love the cliffy..nice way of ending the chapter..*wink* hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 11:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. Great story! Please update soon! i love this! i am like...hooked too it! god dammit! *opps sorry...bad happite.* anywasy please update soon. I really like this and having Kagome and Inuyasha as friends put a whole new twist to it. I wonder....when....or are you going to put Kagome and Inuyasha together.....you know like a couple? that would be soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute! cant wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can and i hopr that you have a nice day!!! ~_~Hitsugaya630~_~
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Title: SANGO THE PHYSIC
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 00:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FIRST OFF JUST LET ME SAY!!!! "I love this story", "I love this chapter"," I can't wait for the next one"hehehe Meanwhile back at the story. IT WAS CUTE THE WAY YASHA GOT HER OUT OF A BAD MOOD WITH OUT EVEN KNOWING HE WAS DOING IT... BUT A SPEECHLESS YASHA IS A REALLY STRANGE THING lol I WOULDN'T BLAME HER FOR gloating OR EVEN DOING A LITTLE VICTORY DANCE!!!! BUT BEING FRIENDS PUT A WHOLE NEW SLANT ON THEM AND HOW THEY CAN ACT AN TALK TO EACH OTHER!!!! BUT THE KICKER CAME WHEN SANGO SAID "You two look so cute together." AFTER THAT ONE maybe it should be SANGO THE PHYSIC!!!! "I love it," ,"great chapter"AND DON'T FORGET TO "update soon," Sorry but here comes the bad pun WRITE ON I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS!@!@!@
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Reviewed By: future author On: November 22, 2007 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter. My favorite part is the interactions between Kag and Inu. Their teasing banter and silly arguments make me laugh. I enjoy those two together. I'm glad their friends now. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until the next update, good luck.
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 12:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the banter you have with Inuyasha and Kagome. I loved the part where they argued about how she surpassed him in sarcasism. That was pretty funny. I like how they are really friends now. Keep up the terrific work. Happy Turkey day to you too!
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Title: enjoyed
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 06:08 EST
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I enjoyed this chapter...I wonder what Kaogme would say if she learned that it was Inuyasha...Why was inuyasha so shaken up though? Well I guess I'll just have to read more ne Update whe you can!
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Reviewed By: CanineKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 05:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chappy. I hope Sota wakes soon. Tell your sister Happy Birthday and Happy Thanksgiving.
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Title: Comprehensive Review
Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 04:58 EST
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Ok, let's fulfill your wish for a comprehensive review. Since this is my first review for this story I'm reviewing the whole thing. Ready? **takes a huge breath** I LOVE YOUR STORY! Absolutely fab characterisation, great plotline and interesting twists make this story a must-read. The transition of Kagome from the prim and proper perfect girl to the 'I-don't-care-what-the-world-thinks' girl has been amazing and extremely beleivable. The balance between witiness, emotional drama and suspense is also very nicely portrayed. The pace of the story is also good. It moves along nicely without unnecessarily jarring the reader. Its not too descriptive (as unfortunately my stories tend to be) but is enough to give the reader a good feel for the story's environment. I read most of the earlier chapters with a goofy smile on my face loving the situations and dialogues. I think that the OCs that you have introduced are interesting but perhpas some more info could have been provided about them, a little more charcterisation for them. OR perhaps you did that intentionally. I AM extremely curious about what happened to Inuyasha and his friends. I have a sort of vague idea what it could be but I'm anxious to know whether I'm correct or not. You said that the last chapter was difficult for you to write, but I think that your 'witty banter' was spot on. Well-written and totally in character. Even the bit about Kagome hating sympathy cause it just made it all worse was very nicely done. It touched a special chord with me cause something very similar happened to me after my accident. Anyhow, the cliffy is nice and I wonder when Kagome will get to know that the mysterious saviour was Inuyasha. I know you don't like your reviewers writing "Great chapter, please update soon" but I think you should be happy that atleast people are reviewing it and appreciating your work. You should ask writers like me who don't get many reviews how important even those "please update" reviews are. At the same time I do agree that with the kind of hardwork that a writer puts into his/her story, the least a reviewer could do is to write more than "please update". So, having run out of breath I guess I'll just end with - I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon! :) :D LOL~~~~~~Briana
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! An update!! Thanx! Love this story!! Can't wait to read more!!!
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