| "Bad Influences" Reviews/Comments [ 344 ] |
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Reviewed By: fallenangeldai666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 17:06 EST
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oh dat was so cute! i can't believe it! i loved it! plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: December 29, 2008 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am happy that the story is comiong along so great. I was a litlle worry that you might stop when it was getting good. Please up date soon. Thank you again for not stoping the story
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 12:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! :) Their conversation is so squishy and cute. I'm interested in the addition of this new character, though and why the "gang violence" upsets Miroku so much. Could it have anything to do with the "secret" InuYasha and his friends are keeping, the "shooting", etc. Glad to see an update more!
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Title: YUMMY
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 15:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMY THE FLUFNBUTTER IS GETTING THICK!!!! NICE CHAPTER!!!! .WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT,,,, ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... . I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS,
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: November 29, 2008 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squels* holy cow i love this ^_____^ i was slowly taking my time to get through this :P and noooo!! not the bad news next T-T .... Oo good luck with your exams!! i just did mine over here and waiting for results... *gets scared*
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 18:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD LUCK ON YOUR CHEMISTRY EXAM.... unless you already took it, i know im a few days late... uhh -- HOPE YOU DID GOOD ON YOUR CHEMISTRY EXAM! yep.. one of those outta work =)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good luck on the home work!!! another fabulous (gay fashion designers on tv...I'm starting to pick up the language...) story!!
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Reviewed By: sherii-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE u better update!!!! i'll go crazy if u don't, dude this is awesome. aaaaaahh!!!!! the fluffyness is overloading my brane!!!!aaaargh UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!!!UPDATTEEEE!!! oh and i love u :)
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Reviewed By: inuyashaismylover(too lazy to log on) On: October 02, 2008 11:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Sorry for the late review! Please update soon!
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Title: OMG-- AMAZINGNESS!!
Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 04:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just got my internet back up the other night, and tonight i checked my email for fanfic updates and saw that this story was updated!! i flipped out and began reading immediately!! it was sooooooo good, i was not disappointed!! XD.. well, i was kinda sad that there was no chapter 23 yet, but i will be patient for it. i no rushed chapters arent as good as--- uh-- nonrushed chapters... yeah, lol. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! XDDD
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Title: AAAAAAWWWW TO CUTE
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY NICE REVISION LIKED THE EXTRA PAGES THE BED ROOM BIT WAS FUNNY AND TO CUTE BEING EMBARRASSED AND LIKING THE WAY IT FEELS TO BE IN HIS ARMS AT HE SAME TIM!!!! .WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT,,,, ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... . I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS,
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 23:47 EDT
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lol wow poor kagome always getting teased by somebody well great chappy as always cant wait for the next update! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: pc On: August 24, 2008 18:22 EDT
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Thanks for the update. :) I loooooove this story... top 5 in my book. And I feel like it brings something fresh to a not-so-original plot. Kudos. I adore this fic.
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: August 23, 2008 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you ever read a type of story you normally dread and make fun of, even if only among your friends? This is that type of story for me but I find my self enjoying this particular story. It truly amazes me that you were able to take something that's over done and cliche and make it your own. Congratulations once again. You've found yourself a new reader and one that can hardly keep her opinions to herself. Lol. I found I liked the addition to the chapter. Not as much as I probably would have liked a new chapter but there's no rush. I like that there are adults in this and the 'children' can't do whatever they want. I've noticed in most if not all high school fics that there is little to no adult guidance. Hell if my high school days were like that I'd probably would have about three children, no job and be living off the state. I also like how no every last one of your characters are filthy rich. Talk about unrealistic. But for the most part this seems like something that could happen, well as far as InuYasha is concerned. Right now my only concern is the fact that Kagome blushes so much and so easily, something you'll have her grow out of gradually I'm sure. I feel that with the amount of attention she gets it would take something massive to truly emabarrass her. I guess I can except that it's the individual attention from someone she actually wants attention from can be enough to cause the easy, frequent blush. As it was an addition to a previous chapter there's not much to say. I hope this review will suffice. Now I'll say I look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation. Nikki MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
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Title: great
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 07:55 EDT
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this is an amazing story cant wait for more
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