| "Bad Influences" Reviews/Comments [ 344 ] |
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 01:29 EDT
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good chapter, I like it so far, and I can't wait for the next one to come. That Tatsuyo or whatever that guys name is, is going to be a big trouble isn't he? Man, all that drama that's going to unfold will be excellent. Well Happy writings and a merry Muse.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 00:42 EDT
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tsk tsk Tatsuya.. didn't anyone ever tell you that you can't come between true love. ... I guess not. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kazuko On: October 28, 2006 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fan fic. It shows new sides to the charaters and gives an exciting plot line. It leaves the reader wondering what is going to happen next. Don't give up and keep writing! It's not always about the length of the chapter as much as it is about the content. Try to set aside time each day to write and make it a constant. Good Job!!
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: October 16, 2006 13:35 EDT
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Wow, three chapters and I'm already hooked, I am hoping you update soon, I'm anxiously waiting for the next one... Happy writings a merry Muse.
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 01:58 EDT
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That was great! I hope you get the next chapter out soon.
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Title: huh?
Reviewed By: zamba136 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 03:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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what did you edit about this capter, just now? anything important to the plot, anything added? i'd read it to see, but i'm so behind on my work, and i've got other stories that i'm trying to catch up on. i like this story, by the way!
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 21:24 EDT
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cool that was good . plz update soon
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 00:29 EDT
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Haha! Underwear. ^_^ Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 09:47 EDT
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: zamba136 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
4000 characters huh? anyway, good story, writing is exceptional, but i've seen three better authors(don't get me wrong, 3 out of 20 or tirty is good) i didn't hear a single mistake(it's a plus of having a mac) originality is as high as i'd give someone who used, not, his/her own characters.
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 14:08 EDT
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Great chappie, update soon!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 08:35 EDT
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Another great chapter! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: little-pixie(not logged on) On: October 08, 2006 07:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
v. gd! plz update
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 00:58 EDT
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I like it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 18:41 EDT
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^___^ Me likey, update soon! Also, it's not "vise" it's "vice" With a C. Just wanted to let you know! THANKIES! I wuv your story, please update soon! ^^
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