Title: please Reviewed By: deepsnow On: November 23, 2006 17:38 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i just love your story you know the characters even little Kumiko she is so cute and Miroku and Sango's son sorry forgot his name he's so shy it's so cute. please write more i'm inching to know what happens next oh i almost forgot i dont know how this really work so please dont email me or something like that please again please write more chapters thanks
Reviewed By: t recorder On: September 06, 2006 15:08 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: it was really a laugh and poor daughter and miurokus son they have to gather a team of there own and inuyashas daughter gets to see a side of her dad she as nerver seen before. I'm sure you have somthing planed but if and when naruke returns you shaould have there daghter meet him an since sh dosn't know naruke her should be "nice" to her and since her sices are like a certain haneyu she freakes out runs tells inuyaha and kagome an then well you can dicide form them. t recorder [sorry can't remember childrens name at the moment ]
