Title: I do like but something seems off.
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 05:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
As my title suggests I do like this fic but it sorta seems off, at least to me. Um, do you have yahoo instant messenger? 'Cause if you do I think it would be easier to talk to you. I feel weird when I reveiw to people about a fic in it's first chapter when I have absolutely no idea where it's headed. my yahoo address if you do want to talk to me is death_by_senbon@yahoo.com. I like it I really do but I think if you let me tweek it a bit it will help with people understanding and really likeing it. Please reply if you feel like it or feel free to ignore me. Either way. Arie Date.
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