| "Schöner Träumer" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Susan009 On: January 30, 2007 22:12 CST
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Great start. I like how it explains how Naruto got the last name he uses. So he is some way related to Sasuke. I must admit I like the relantionship that he has with Iruka in the series, so I wouldn't mind seeing that worked in. Can't wait to see what happens when he comes back to village. I think that with him looking so much like his father that most adults will guess who he is. Also even if he leaves the village, the Uchiha sound like they would demand him back. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mr. Iknoweverythingaboutnaruto I hope you have your priorietes set out because your gonna die. This I promise you. Other than that keep updating this fic. Mr.Iknoweverythingaboutnaruto one more thing, everything you wrote, has mothing to do with this fic.
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Title: Nihulus
Reviewed By: Mordrid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good please update soon.
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Reviewed By: DarkestDragon102894 On: September 10, 2006 18:47 CDT
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I'M VERY SORRY ABOUT MY BROTHER'S COMMENT! Mr.Iknoweverythingaboutnaruto is my little brother. If it offended you, I'm really sorry!
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Title: you suck
Reviewed By: Mr. Iknoweverythingaboutnaruto On: September 10, 2006 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the worst naruto fanfic I've ever read. First, Naruto would never ever stop wearing his trademark orange. Second, if he didn't stealthe scroll of sealing he wouldn't have known the shadowclone jutsu.(wich is diffrent from regular clones) Third, Shino would NEVER talk that much. He'd usually say one or two words,and it's Aburame, NOT ABRUME!!!!!!!! >_< Finally, Kyuubi-sama would NEVER, EVER, EVER say junky stuff about precious people BLAH, BLAH BLAH! P.S Academy students can't learn the tree climbing technique when they're still in the ACADEMY!
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Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 23:46 CDT
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Keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to the next update you do!
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Reviewed By: otakunoyaoi On: September 05, 2006 18:17 CDT
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Yay, good!Kyuubi fics make me smile. And brother!Shino is a nice change as well. But Sakura will always scare me, no matter what fic I read. Good job, please continue this story.
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