| "Twist of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: ordieth117 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a fun fic. Makes me wonder who his guardian was. I look forward to more of his conquests. "That's Ikari. Shijni Ikari."
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Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going with this story. This is one of the best stories I have read and I would like to see more for this story. Plase update this story.
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Title: Twist of Fate
Reviewed By: Laser Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story to be highly enjoyable. I would deeply appreciate it if you continue writing some more chapters of this fascinating story. I would really like to see where you plan to go with this story. Because I believe this story has a great deal of potential. So please update this story as soon as possible.
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Title: tomdj
Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 14:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
loved it hope to see more of this one
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. Good story but will Misato be his only conquest? I'm hoping at least Maya gets in on the action. Preferably more but it's your story. I hope to see more.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an entertainable story. i hope u can expand upon it becasue it provides a good number of outlets for it to go through.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: RyoTheSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Now thats a way to make Shinji a man! I know it seems perfect, but thats it? Are you making more?
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Title: Wow, just wow
Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one is wonderful! It threw me for a short while with the out-of-character confident Shinji but once I got over the OOC-ness I enjoyed this one alot. Even though it doesn't look like you will be continuing it, I'd love to see a story about that 'detailed physical exam' with Maya and Dr. Akagi ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
This one is wonderful! It threw me for a short while with the out-of-character confident Shinji but once I got over the OOC-ness I enjoyed this one alot. Even though it doesn't look like you will be continuing it, I'd love to see a story about that 'detailed physical exam' with Maya and Dr. Akagi ^_^
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem to enter Hentai contest involving the older girls on Evangelion. I'm definitely not against it but I'd like a balance with Rei, Asuka and Hikari, even Mana would make things more interesting for our intrepid hero! ;-) Great little dirty story BTW! dennisud
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