| "War and Slavery" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: kankuronumber1gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU SHOULD REALLY WRITE MORE I MEAN THIS STORY IS LIKE NO OTHER AND ITS REALLY GOOD I NEED TO READ MORE
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Reviewed By: DarkRomance1313 On: April 08, 2007 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you write more, plain and simple.
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Title: HI!!!!!!!! >o
Reviewed By: namaste On: February 01, 2007 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is ssssssoooooooooooo ccccooooollllll,sssssoooo ggrrreeeaatttt,sssooooo........i dont know what to say. I WANT MORE!! no, I NEED MORE!!!!!! Do more, I have been waiting like for ever for you to update. SO GET.TO.WIRITING!!!!! Because I love this story!!!!
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Title: Very good.
Reviewed By: Addie777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Almost two months . . . No! I love this story! It's so hard to find good fanfiction! Please continue. Anyway, I don't think she's Mary Sue.
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Reviewed By: yaoi godess On: November 26, 2006 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it. update really soon.
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay when do you write your next chapter. I look forword to it.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh dont think she's too mary sue type. anyway, love your fic! took too long to get it update you, you and your bribes! >.> anyway, dont take so long to add a new chapter k? ja ne!
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Title: About Mei Lin
Reviewed By: LadyNyoko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 17:21 CST
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I like her. The constantly PMSing attitude is awesome. And as long as she doesn't try to get into Itachi's or Shikamaru's bed, I'm fine. In fact... I'd like to see her wrath directed towards Deidara. >D (Cause he made Gaara suffer, and I love Gaara. Thus, Deidara must suffer.)
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 20:22 CST
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Why did Kisame and Itachi stage the show between themselves for the slaves?? Why do they care if the slaves see them as humans? Hmmm... Is Shikamaru going to be able to fulfill his goal of starvation or is Itachi going to realize that Shika isn't eating his food? What will the reaction of Konoha (and maybe Sound.. if it matters to them) be when/if they realize that Shikamaru is now with one of the enemies? When Itachi said that they (the slaves) should bathe, is there really a religion that is against bathing or is it something you made up? Thank you for updating!!
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Title: Oh God!
Reviewed By: blisblops On: November 11, 2006 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why why why won't you update this?You tease with amazing senarios then,buttkiss.Please,I'm grovelling,write some more, alot more.I'm getting blue brains from the wait.Thank you.This is too unique to desert!Do kill it!@!!
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Reviewed By: Mehmeh On: October 12, 2006 16:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes! An interesting story with good plot and the most bizarre pairing anyone could think of. I wish to see more.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 23:12 CDT
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I love it!! You're right that happily ever ending stories sell, but for some reason I love it when my favorite character either dies, causing his lover to feel guilty cause it's most likely his fault, or causes his lover to become jealous... I don't know why *sigh* Please update soon! I can't wait to see how Shikamaru will react toward Itachi now that he is his slave....
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......cool. I like it, update soon please
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