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| "The First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this piece. It is so sensual. There is no need to know why Sesshoumaru is pleasuring himself, and in his dazed lust, I can see these events take place. He is so self-assured that he wouldn't feel threatened by Inuyasha's blushing presence. His parting words were perfect--simply Sesshoumaru. Inuyasha's innocence is sweet. It is believable that he would be enthralled and disoriented to the point that Sesshoumaru could entice him. There is always the feeling that Inuyasha wants affection from his brother, and if this is it, I'm sure he wouldn't reject it. It's amazing how believable you have made this, and without a huge plot to make it work. You took the time to gently ease Inuyasha into the activity. Such minute detail. Wonderful story. I hope to see your writing again one day. Snow
| Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good !
| Reviewed By: PromisedWings On: July 12, 2007 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While reading this, I could definitely tell that you're a serious writer. The imagery was amazing and very detailed. Lots of other one-shots like this are done with lots of repetitiveness in the adjectives, but in this, there was always a new and creative way to describe something as the story progressed. That also keeps things more interesting... and sexy. I think I like Sess/Inu pairings the best. And as to why our Sesshy was out pleasing himself in the wilderness? Hah, he's the Lord Sesshomaru, the Lord of the West, he can do what he darn well wants to do. And thats just fine, we like a horny Sess. And so does Inuyasha. Well done on the fic! ^_~
| Title: Trysted Punishment of the Inu
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehehehehehehehe! Your now on my favs list. HEHEHEHEHEHEEHEEEE! Keep up the good work. Not many authors have this kind of skill. I don't... :D
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly LOVED THIS! It was sooo hot!! B reading U!
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