| "The Cure For Angst" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: kakasott [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 15:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
kinky..but well written have you done this before?
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Title: The Cure For Angst
Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story you made. Will you please consider writing a full-length story based off this
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Title: Wonderful work
Reviewed By: Capito Celcior [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Continue with this fic, or make a sequel. It truly has potential, and I NEVER though of or ever have seen a fic before where Shinji gains confidence in such a manner, yet it makes complete and total sense when you thing of it....don't give up on this one, please. It holds too much potential.
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Title: I still like it
Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it in ELC3, and I still like it. I think you have a good start on becoming a good lemon writer.
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Reviewed By: donjon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 06:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
KagomeoftheSouth: shut up and go away. TCfA: keep writing.
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Title: good,
Reviewed By: loslomo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
two things: One, very good story and I hope you continue with follow up chapters. Two, to kagomeofthesouth, Maya is one of the "bridge bunnies" that fequently shows up in NGE, may have forgot about her or haven't seen much of the show, either way, the author didn't steal your idea.
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 14:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
did u steal Maya from Mutations? cause i am the owner/creator of Maya and no one asked me if they could use her in their stories except for the fact that i allowed Gdaywalker to use her for Mutations as Mimics girlfriend. if it is a different maya then im sryits just u didnt explain what maya looks like.
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